today is the Domy's
elementary school's trip day.
so they all was feel very excited.
and then they arrived in kyong-ju. and they started to to to resort. that resort was very luxury and very Clean. so they see the all of room in resort room and then they just go to PC room.
But that day night.
They feel really bored.
so they really wanted to escape this resort.
and then they just see the window and they both find the PC room.
and that PC room really looks like Very luxury. so they just escape there .
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when they arrived in PC room, that PC room was closed. so they was trying hard to go their room again. but that resorts door was closed and locked too.
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Thank goodness they were saved :) You could have improved your story by explaining more about the setting and thoughts of each characters. What do you mean by luxury? How did the resort look like?
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ReplyDeleteGreat job joyce!
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Great story Joyce! what will happen next when Domy Key, and Jay is trapped in the PC room!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting!!
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