hello my name is so-yun, Kim.just call me Joyce or so-yun. my hobby is listening a music. and read a books. I usually read about fantasy, such as HARRY POTTER or TARA DUN CAN.
and I can play piano. I started to play since when I was 5years old, buy I'm not good at that.
and my favorite sport is Ping - Pong and Dodge ball. because that sport is very funny and make me feel happy. and that sport help me to diet Success.
and my favorite food is dumpling. because that's just tasty. and we can eat easily. and my another favorite food is Well-done and Medium steak. because that's just so yummy, too.
and I'm from llsan. yum.. in llsan there are lafasta. that's very famous in llsan. because in there , there are very many shopping mall there very many famous restaurant.
and my favorite subject is science. because I like to do an experiment . and I like the new fact in science.
and I have a one pet. that sort is hamster. and my hamster's name is chi hero. and I think chi hero is boy. because he is always nibble his house and he try to escape his house , every day. and he is really really cute and very very rough. bye~
Your introduction is fine until the end, where it abruptly ends. You need a better conclusion.
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